Saturday, February 22, 2014

Bent On Destruction


“The world is full enough of hurts and mischances without wars to multiply them.”
-J.R.R. Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings

I am completely in love with medieval fantasy stories, such as The Lord Of The Rings. So naturally, one of my favorite genres to write is medieval fantasy. I am nearing the completion of my very own short book (about 100 pages or so) called, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon By Margaret Sensenig, Sub-Authored By Mason Miller, Sub-Written By Hannah Privitera and Edited by Amy Black. I am fortunate enough to have friends who help me out with some of my writings and will occasionally write parts for me. Thanks you guys!



“You will bow to me in fear, in dread, in respect and in terror. I come from a great line that has been feared as a great nation, a worthy nation with arms like never seen before!”
–Margaret Sensenig, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“If my love is the only thing that can heal you, let it be so.”
–Mason Miller, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“That shall not be my fate.”
–Margaret Sensenig, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“I have been racing towards death since my sister was taken from me, and have yearned every day to fall into that bottomless pit, but now I am afraid.”
–Mason Miller, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon 

“Then that shall just be my fate. I cannot require anything more from you.”
Hannah Privitera, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“I see that I have something stronger than hate that guides me now.”
–Mason Miller, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“Stay away, sir. This is not a place you wish to stay. Not here, not near me.”
–Margaret Sensenig, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“I am afraid that I will destroy the only thing left in this world that gives me relief from my agony. That thing is you. I love you.”
–Mason Miller, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon   

“Taking in the situation in a hurried glance, Kazrin sped his horse to stop directly in front of them, leapt off the steed with his sword drawn, and questioned them as to what right they claimed in their conduct.”
–Hannah Privitera, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“I am bent on destruction and I cannot bear to think of bringing that upon you.”
–Mason Miller, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“Here lies my father’s sword, Kazimir, whom has seen many a battle, who aided in the slaying of a dragon to save Gildon. And yet, here is Telassar, the symbol of my kinsmen, my nation. The crest that had carried us so far and so long, but now has been forgotten but by a few called the Drathil.”
–Margaret Sensenig, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

“I would rather face this peril by your side than wait helplessly.”                               
–Mason Miller, The Son Of Endrid: The Ruins Of Raldon

Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Revenge Had Felt So Right


Just To Bring Her Back - A Tragedy, Of Sorts 

The ground was hard, his body was tense, and the air was stuck in his throat. Depression set in. It took him over; he relished in this state. The bars before him taunted his soul. The reason for his imprisonment flooded his mind. Her limp body in his arms with a bullet in her heart, the smile on that man’s face as Wade pulled the trigger; it was too much to handle. His heart broke again when he saw her face. Her long brown hair, her hazel eyes that could read his soul, the wedding ring that bound them together, the thoughts drew him to his knees. Wade Parker finally let it go. The strength he had been trying to hold on to crashed. He let salty tears pour down his face. What had he done? Revenge had felt so right. Now he was locked up like the bloody murderer he was.

There is this song called "Kiss It Better" by He Is We. It is a terribly sad song. Below you can listen to it with the lyrics. I suggest doing so. I was inspired to write a story based off of this song. 

It is a modern, romance, action & adventure kind of story. The gist of it is how a man loses his wife, but it was no accident. There was a reason for her death. A bullet to the heart took her from him and he is determined to find the owner of the finger that dared pull the trigger. He knows what he will do if he finds that man: kill him. Wade Parker seeks out the murderer of his wife, but in the end, can he finish the revenge he so looked for? Will his time in jail for the crime he commits be enough to bring her back? Just To Bring Her Back is a short story written by Margaret Sensenig and sub-written by Hannah Privitera (still in the making).    



“She was beautiful, energetic, smart, funny, and…perfect.”
–Hannah Privitera, Just To Bring Her Back


“What had he done? Revenge had felt so right.”
–Margaret Sensenig, Just To Bring Her Back

“He would have followed her to the ends of the world if she’d asked.”
–Margaret Sensenig, Just To Bring Her Back


“Now he was locked up like the bloody murderer he was.”
–Hope Privitera, Just To Bring Her Back


"What haunted his dreams the most was the smile on that man’s face as he died. As Wade pulled the trigger, that man smiled. He had been waiting for that day to come when Wade would avenge his lover."
–Margaret Sensenig, Just To Bring Her Back